Describe a time you worked to overcome a barrier in your academic or professional life. How did you overcome this obstacle and what did you learn about yourself in the process? Please limit your response to 350 words. 1. I have added a few comments in the word document however rewrite the whole essay. 2. The essay should tell a story and the word limit is strictly below 350
3. Last para needs to show that I am able to rise to the challenge and develop an impromptu solution as I have strong data science skills. It should show that I can think critically under pressure 4. More focus needs to be on the last para.
5. The overall essay should be very convincing