I need help with the following:
1) 10 pages of discussion. You need to discuss the results that are found. It is mostly about how the bioadhesive polymer affects the two bacterial strains and how it affects the release of the bacteria. In the first part of the discussion I have written what was the predicted cfu in the final package (written in red).

2) I have added a file called “another thesis” that is a thesis from previous students who had something similiar. That can help you with the discussion of the water-activity results.

3) The excel file called “Book2” is just the results with the graphs if you need to see how the calculations have been made.

4) It is very important that you discuss every possible aspect of the results in a pharmaceutical/microbiological point of view.

5) The stability results are shown and here you have to discuss how the bacterial strains survive due to heat and with the addition of the bioadhesive polymere. I think my supervisor said that there is some articles about manucol LKX (sodium alginate) that it will affect the bacterial strains Lactobacillus very much. I am not sure if we have to use the equations in the graphs for further calculations but if you have the knowledge about it please do calculate it. I will ask my supervisor in 2 days when I see him and let you know.

6) I need you to write about every experiment how to optimization it. And/or which experiments one could have made to optimize the disseration. We have had a lot of time limitations/Restrictions in laboratories due to covid-19. So I need an optimization section that really focuses on optimizing every experiment or maybe one could have done a whole other type of experiments (maybe stain colouring, microscope to see if the bacteria is alive or not) Because we actually dont even know that the results we have are live or dead bacteria. The CFU actually shows us both dead and alive bacteria. Make the optimization 1,5-2 pages.

7. 1 page of conclusion

8. 1 page of abstract

SO:

10 pages discussion
1 page abstract
1 page conclusion
1,5-2 pages optimization

Investigation and formulation principles using in vitro mucoadhesion models with probiotics